Our first presentation

Today, I done my first presentation. It could have gone better, though I praise myself for presenting in front of a large group of people! way out of my element! We received some constructive criticisms. Firstly, we were told to narrow down our ideas, to create a more specific ethos. Our presentation was over detailed. Secondly, we were advised to create more structure. Although the structure of our presentation was in depth, our public speaking was unorganised. In the future, we will ensure all members of the group have a equal amount of speaking time. The feedback has been really helpful.